tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post7589641971392523476..comments2023-11-08T23:06:17.381-08:00Comments on Sugar & Blood: Drabble: Unfolded...Mattyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05504775167541916213noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post-1651233880102372172012-05-25T07:59:33.157-07:002012-05-25T07:59:33.157-07:00And you are clever!And you are clever!Mattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05504775167541916213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post-1892852200625946522012-05-24T07:10:01.097-07:002012-05-24T07:10:01.097-07:00Wait, that was to paying attention, not about bein...Wait, that was to paying attention, not about being clever.Navimiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08504557372435466448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post-30528547795688062092012-05-24T07:09:05.648-07:002012-05-24T07:09:05.648-07:00Of course I am! /points to her eyes like a hawkOf course I am! /points to her eyes like a hawkNavimiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08504557372435466448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post-38311947447755174152012-05-24T06:07:29.157-07:002012-05-24T06:07:29.157-07:00One cardinal rule of many writers is it's not ...One cardinal rule of many writers is it's not the writing, it's the rewrite. I was wondering if anyone would notice. I was thinking about doing one drabble, and showing its revisions. That is one bad writing habit I have gotten into, is not allowing my mental space for revising. /sigh<br /><br />But - you are so clever! Makes me happy someone is paying attention! :)Mattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05504775167541916213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3878753035017181139.post-39413780147403209292012-05-23T20:49:34.371-07:002012-05-23T20:49:34.371-07:00Matty. You changed the story.Matty. You changed the story.Navimiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08504557372435466448noreply@blogger.com